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3 Essential Tips for Writing a Strong Thesis Statement

| By Tara Shekouri |


When writing a paper, a thesis statement is often necessary to sum up the key point. It is typically placed toward the end of the introduction paragraph as a smooth opening into your body paragraphs. Sometimes, developing one may be a slight challenge. This article provides three helpful tips for building a strong and effective thesis statement.


1. What type of paper are you writing?

In order to build a compelling thesis, you need to take into consideration which type of paper you are writing in order to determine your approach. A few include an analytical, argumentative, or expository paper. An analytical paper entails exploring, investigating, and evaluating an issue/idea. An argumentative paper presents a claim about a topic and later uses evidence to support and justify it. An expository paper explains something. Depending on which you chose, your thesis should be structured accordingly.


Example of an analytical thesis: An analysis of phone usage in the classroom reveals that while smartphones may provide benefits as an educational tool, they also pose major distractions that may hinder learning.


Example of an argumentative thesis: Schools should implement strict policies on phone usage in the classroom in order for an enhanced learning experience free from distractions.


Example of an expository thesis: Policies surrounding phone usage in class emphasize the importance of balancing access to educational resources, maintaining student focus, and promoting responsible technology use.


2. Don’t overcomplicate it.

A thesis statement aims to swiftly provide the reader with a clear sense of the direction and purpose of the paper. Typically, a concise thesis statement is between 20–50 words (as demonstrated in the above examples). A thesis statement should not be a question, provide facts, or be overly broad. Figuratively, allow your readers to dip their toes into the water.


3. Revise your thesis statement

While writing your paper, you may notice the piece taking a slight change in direction, or you may introduce some new points that your thesis does not necessarily take into consideration. Throughout your writing process, revise your thesis multiple times in order to ensure that it properly reflects the contents of your paper.


In conclusion, your thesis statement should be representative of the type of paper you’re writing, be concise, and be the connecting point of all of your ideas. By following these tips, you'll ensure your thesis is compelling and effectively guides your reader throughout your piece.

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